小小甩棍的心声
<br>大家好<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>我叫<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>”</font>甩棍<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>”</font><font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>也算是老人新面孔<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>潜水以久<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>平时总是在坛子里转转<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>今天之所以上来冒个泡<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>主要是最近一段时间<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>受了我主人的不公证待遇<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>心里不平<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>想上坛子里来磨叽几句<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>请各位<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>DX</font>给讨个说法<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>.</font><br>真是林子大了<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>啥鸟都有<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>就抓个小小的抢包贼<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>也至于的表现一把<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>还写个帖子发到网站上<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>生怕地球人都不知道<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>大大咧咧的还吹呼自己怎样怎样<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>其实呢<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>抓我的手一个劲的冒汗<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>.</font>呵呵<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>这点他就没敢实话实说<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>不过看他帖子发过以后<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>还有<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>DX</font>问过我是何东东<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>我也挺美的<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>毕竟我也出了一点小名气<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>后来据说还忽悠的部分<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>DX</font>也请了我的一些哥们来武装自己<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>也算是忽悠大家中了一些小毒<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>.</font>
<br>不说别的了<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>最近几天有些事情我是气不过了<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>才上来揭发一下我的主人的<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>.</font>
<br><font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>3</font>月<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>29</font>号<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>我主人出差<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>去的是什麽河北的赤城<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>就是大伙常去玩的叫什麽<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>”</font>老掌沟<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>”</font>的附近<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>破破的土路<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>我正在手扣里努力忍受着颠簸之苦<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>平时总是在公路上走<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>我还凑乎<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>今天又是颠<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>又是土的<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>我是晕头涨脑的<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>.</font>突然主人一个刹车<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>靠<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>我直接贴前板上了<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>啥事呀<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>.</font>
<br>停了一会<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>车又继续走上了<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>可是走的很急<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>很猛<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>我正纳闷呢<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>手扣打开了<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>主人把我从我的屋子<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>(</font>皮套<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>)</font>里拿了出来<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>阳光初现<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>还挺晃眼<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>嘿<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>车里还有个老头<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>正哭呢<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>说的还是方言<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>好在我走南闯北的<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>也能懂些<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>细细一听是这样一回事<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>-------</font>
<br>老头是个收破烂的<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>这天是天气晴朗<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>略有小风<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>老头和媳妇收拾了这几天的战利品<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>(</font>破纸箱子及部分废品<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>),</font>装满了一驴车<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>要到县城去<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>把废品卖了<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>买些粮食和别的一些生活用品<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>生活也是艰苦<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>.</font>走到半路<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>两个骑摩托的小伙子拦住了老头<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>拿出一个编织袋子<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>里面是半袋子的黄铜块<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>说是从工地搞来的<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>卖给老头<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>换个烟钱<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>老头是愿意<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>那可是相当的愿意呀<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>可老头身上一共是<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>60</font>大圆<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>怎麽也不够那些黄铜的价钱呀<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>两小伙子商量了一下<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>就和老头说<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>反正是换个烟钱<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>就<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>60</font>块钱给老头了<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>老头开心呀<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>心里还嘀咕拣了个大便宜<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>就返回头和媳妇拿钱去了<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,(</font>老头媳妇还是个经济管理人<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>).</font>
<br>两小伙子收了老头的钱<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>就把袋子扔给老头<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>骑摩托走了<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>老头高兴呀<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>上了驴车就想和媳妇显摆一下多好的黄铜<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>到了县城能赚一小笔<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>可一打开袋子<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>---------</font>傻了眼喽<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>哪是黄铜<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>半袋子砖头<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>.</font>那两个哥们趁老头取钱的时候<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>给老头来了个调包记<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>.</font>
<br>老头和媳妇那个哭呦<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,60</font>块钱<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,(</font>后来知道在那个地方是一家<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>3</font>口一个月的粮食钱呦<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>).</font>正好这个时候<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>我的主人路过<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>老头就把我主人给拦下来了<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>一说情况<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>我主人就让老头上了车<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>说是追一下试试<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>.</font>
<br>我一看<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>呦呵<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>情况全部抄收了<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>今天又是我主人拿我壮胆的时候了<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>也该是老天有眼<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>也该是这两个骗子倒霉<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>才不过<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>10</font>分种<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>就远远的看到了骑摩托的两个人<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>也许是路不好走<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>也许是正琢磨下一个倒霉的老头<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>反正是不快<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>车上的老头一下不哭了<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>连声的说就是他们<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>就是他们<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>.</font>我主人开的可是小切呀<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>走这样的沙砾和土质路面<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>那可是强项<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>两分钟过后<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>已经是和摩托来了个头尾相接<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>只见我主人左右一晃方向盘就抢到了摩托的前面<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>左手向右一打轮<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>右手一拉手刹车<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>小切在轮胎与路面的摩擦声中一个横向漂移<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,(</font>呵呵<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>头文字<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>D</font>我<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>ASP</font>也看过<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>给你们整个时尚词汇<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>)</font>一片灰土<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>那两个哥们驾驶技术还不错<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>也是一个急刹车<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>差点没整我大哥两驱小切的身上<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>反正是被灰土也呛了个够戗<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>.</font>我主人开门下车<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>右手一甩<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,”</font>喀嚓<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>”</font>一声<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>我是展开了身躯<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>哼哼<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>小样<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>,</font>今天你们算是要遭殃了<font face="Times new=" Roman? New?>.</font>
[此贴子已经被作者于2009-5-14 14:25:24编辑过]
我坐沙发？？？先顶，再看！ <br>写的挺好玩,但是ASP不是甩棍的代名词,LZ改一下,你应该叫点什么自己想一下,如果用的真是ASP公司产的甩棍无妨!
<br>定的不错,再来一段! 完了？接下来你的经历呢？是不是大展拳脚？期待下文。。。 文笔不错啊，还有下文么 ？ <br>呵呵，下文呢。挺不错的，是故事吗 第一人称 不错哦 一个生活的插曲 叙述很平和 具有猫扑风格的帖子 呵呵，楼主够有才的啦 楼主是不是等着游侠给发钱啊 <br>呵呵 拟人手法叙述的不错
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