21银蚂蚁 发表于 2009-6-26 09:46

断章

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<br>&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp; 狗狗很乖地坐在我身旁
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<br><font size="3">&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>我坐在篝火旁——</font>
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<br><font size="3">&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>看着夕阳掉进了那边的玉米地里</font>
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<br><font size="3">&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>我用刚才抚摩狗狗的手</font>
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<br><font size="3">&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>点了点它黝黑的鼻子</font>
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<br><font size="3">&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>教给它</font>
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<br><font size="3">&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>“你”</font>
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<br><font size="3">&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>又点了点自己的鼻子</font>
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<br><font size="3">&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>“我”</font>
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<br><font size="3">&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>又指了指天空的东南方</font>
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<br><font size="3">&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>“那里，星星”</font>

诗酒 发表于 2009-6-26 09:50

这个感觉不出什么。呵呵，还是比较喜欢你其他几首。

核潜艇 发表于 2009-6-26 09:52

强烈建议增设文学版块

仙剑奇侠传 发表于 2009-6-26 09:58

呵呵 诗人还真多啊

drake 发表于 2009-6-26 10:22

完全体会不到意境，这首诗

e 发表于 2009-6-26 10:42

<br>哥们儿 你原创太多了 打包上传吧

玛莉莎 发表于 2009-6-26 10:56

当你指着自己鼻子的时候 小心狗狗跳起来咬你鼻子&nbsp; 嘎嘎

xgdy 发表于 2009-6-26 11:33

这个图片，在冬天蛮适合做桌面

TXB 发表于 2009-6-26 11:43

<br>好!LZ的文章真不错

小山猫 发表于 2009-6-26 12:02

<br>断章～～取义？
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喵喵 发表于 2009-6-26 12:24

这首，貌似没什么意境可言………………

21银蚂蚁 发表于 2009-6-26 12:27

口下留情，除了石子和老虎，这个可是自己最喜欢的啦

johnson 发表于 2009-6-26 21:29

文字真的没什么感觉，但是图片真的很有意境

lao_dao 发表于 2009-6-27 13:10

图片貌似是猫？

喵喵 发表于 2009-6-27 16:21

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>lao_dao</i>在2009-6-27 13:10:00的发言：</b><br/>图片貌似是猫？ </div>
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